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Types Of Editing: 4 That Will Improve Your Writing

Top Content Consulting

This will help polish up your prose and allow your work to shine. Editors have extensive tools and training that, when properly wielded, will make your prose sing. If a line editor thinks it can be strengthened by tightening it up or using fewer words, then it will likely be cleaned up to make it more concise.

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“Whoever/?Whomever” in Fiction: Which Should Your Character Use?

The Subversive Copy Editor

In the third example, the clipped prose style begs for “Harder than the bullet,” which happens to be grammatically correct. It’s not that a gangster can’t use standard English; the problem is the inconsistency between the slangy “Yeah, shut up” and the use of “fewer” where “less” would be more natural.

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Jack Hart Talks about Wordcraft

The Subversive Copy Editor

I’m also convinced that it produces unoriginal prose that’s much stiffer and more cramped. For years I edited every line to perfection before moving on, and when I finished a piece it was completely finished. But I’m convinced that stopping to edit as you go makes writing much more painful and takes much longer.  A.

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When Friends Find Grammar “Errors” in Your Novel

The Subversive Copy Editor

The grain of truth: “Said” followed by a pronoun (“said she”) is more at home in poetry or highly lyrical prose. Why it’s not true: “Because it’s demonstrably silly,” said the copyeditor. And inconvenient,” added the intern. Maybe the myth arose from an unwarranted extrapolation from those contexts.

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7 Tips for Bloggers with Learning Disabilities

ProBlogger

Not so much functionally—there are people who can help you write cleaner prose. I hire a copy editor to clean up my posts, and while the ideas, connections, turns of phrase, overall structure and layout are mine, it still feels inauthentic. Write with a copy editor. So here’s my response. Persistence pays.

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Writing Fast, Collaboration, And Author Mindset With Daniel Willcocks

The Creative Penn

And I was reading through these, and at the time I was a nonfiction proofreader and copy editor, sorting out other people's work, and I was reading these stories just going like these are—like I didn't understand the medium of short stories very well, and obviously, if you're going to start anywhere, start with Stephen King.

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Exclamation Points in Creative Writing

The Subversive Copy Editor

But somewhere in the last century, the shouty little mark fell out of fashion in literary prose. Editors today frown on excessive exclaiming even in mainstream fiction, outside of books for young children and comic books. (Samuel Richardson,  Pamela , 43). Exclamation points still serve in all those ways.