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How a Bestselling Author Revises One Sentence: A Lesson in Vivid Writing

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So, picture my delight when I came across a fabulous example of revision … By a bestselling author! This revision is more fundamental than cutting a couple of words or ironing out a few typos. What’s up with that sentence? So, why did Karr revise that sentence? How to revise your writing.

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What Is Good Writing?

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I highlight ideas and sentences that attract my attention. Sometimes, I savor a book slowly. I pick the book up, read a few pages, then put it down again. Later, I treat myself to rereading those highlights. What makes writing worth savoring like that? At school, you probably learned that good writing is coherent, focused, and correct.

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How to Write Conversationally: An (Almost) COMPLETE Guide with 18 Examples

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Take out the writerliness The basis of conversational writing is a simple text so readers can follow your ideas with ease: Eliminate complicated sentences >> Avoid the passive voice >> Replace writerly words >> Use transitional words often >> Here’s are some examples … 1. So, keep your sentences simple and mostly short.

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Improve Your Understanding: How to Paraphrase Articles

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Sentence structure: Rearrange the order of clauses and phrases or use new subjects and verbs. Sentence structure: Combine multiple smaller sentences into one, or break up a large sentence into two or three. To use information from articles in your own writing, it’s helpful to know how to paraphrase an article effectively.

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How to Use AI to Enhance Your Storytelling Process

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It refers to assistive tasks like brainstorming, character development, research, and revisions. For example: Write a five-paragraph essay about the romantic relationship between Hamlet and Ophelia in Hamlet. Example AI story writing prompt for brainstorming: List 5 potential angles for a historical fiction novel about Harriet Tubman.

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Tone in Email: Definition and Tips on Striking a Professional Tone

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Similar to how there are many physical cues (arms crossed, brows furrowed, for example) for in-person communication, many other cues contribute to tone in written emails. Sentence length Emails composed solely of facts in short sentences seem choppy, which can be jarring to a reader’s ear or come off as unnecessarily demanding.

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An Open Letter to Anyone Who Feels Writing Is (Sometimes) Hard

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Only then, start the revision process : See what’s pretty good already—that’s what you can keep See what’s redundant—that’s what you throw out See what needs improvement—that’s what you start working on Writing is not just typing words and sentences. So, it’s normal when a first draft turns out wonky. What to do?

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